Hey guys. How are you all?
I got many suggestions to start writing poetry but I always use to say that poetry isn’t my cup of coffee (I don’t drink tea😜).
But one fine evening when it was raining and I was reading a novel, I suddenly thought to give poetry a try.
So I sat and thought for a long and wrote a lot. I finally came up with my first poetry. I hope you all will like it. It’s my first attempt in writing poems. So here is the first one I wrote:
My First and Last Love
Loving you is my biggest achievement
I can never find your replacement
Thinking of you gives my life sense
My life without you is a suspense
Gone are those days when I use to see you everyday
Now my heart is stray
Dreaming about you is the only option left
Not having you makes me depressed
Life without you isn’t fair
Life without you is full of despair
Tears flow down as I reach the end
Losing you have left me in torment.
Do tell your opinion on my first take at poetry. I hope you all will like it and will relate to it.
Very nice!!
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Thank you😊😊
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Bang on!!!!! ✌✌But sad poetry.. Why?
P.S. Extra round of applause for good handwriting. 😊😄
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Sad poetry is what came to mind when I thought to write it. That’s the truth of my life. I am glad you liked the it☺️☺️
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That’s okay.. Your choice. 😃
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☺️☺️
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You write really good.
You story is same as mine..
I wrote my first poem during my exam..my friends and family used to say that i write pretty well..and i also felt that i should give it a try..actually i was writing a short story but it turned put to be a beautiful poem. “A peaceful night”..you can read it on my blog..
And how can someone not like tea.
😀
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Thank you. Many have story same as mine. I’ll definitely read your poem too.. I don’t. I never drink tea. I like coffee😂😂
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earlier i was a coffee addict..but now i’ve shifted to tea..
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I am not an addict. But I just prefer coffee over tea. I drink one cup in 3-4 days
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I used to drink 3 4 cups in a day..:D
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Oh. Na I don’t..
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Same here
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😉😉
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Agree with the tea part:)
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Hehe😂☺️
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A good start Mehul. Lot of strong emotions here. Do keep writing. You will only keep getting better at it. 👏👏
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Thank you. I hope I’ll get better. Writing the poetry taught me that it’s all about writing your emotions and poetry will be done…
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Beautiful and such deep words, Mehul. Lovely poem.
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked my first poem☺️
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Welcome Mehul and you wrote very well, continue to do so.
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I wrote a second poem too.. I’ll share that soon😊
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K great please do so, Mehul.
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I’ll share it next week on Monday
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K will surely go thru it.
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Thank you☺️☺️😊
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Welcome
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Very nice !
Best of luck !
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it😊😊
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Hello..just found your blog today. This is an amazing first poem. It’s lyrical. I appreciate that you took pen and paper and played there first. Well done and very brave to share this. I look forward to reading more. 🙂
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Thank you very much. Pen and paper are my best friends. I share things with them which I don’t share with anyone. I am glad you liked my first poem. I’ll soon be sharing my second poem☺️☺️
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welcome to the world of poetry 🙂
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Thank you☺️ I am happy being here
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I love it…. I do relate… I find poetry writing to be fun it’s also relaxing.
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Yup it’s do relaxing. It was my first poetry and I am happy with the kind if response it got..
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I would love to read more poems written by you… Write on!📝📄📃
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I have written 1 more. I want to share that but not getting enough time to share. I’ll share it soon..
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Ok cool…
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I’ll try to share it tonight…
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😍 beautiful!
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Thank you very much. I an glad you liked my first poem😊☺️😇
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Love it 😍
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Thanks a lot☺️ I’ll share my second poem tonight.. Do read that too😊😊
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I will 😊
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Nope u are wrong….
POETRY IS JUST YOUR CUP OF COFFEE 😁 IN LOVE WITH THIS😍
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Thank you very much. Your comment means a lot to me. I am glad you liked the poetry☺️☺️☺️
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Yes!!!! I loved it😍😍
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Thank you. I am going to share a new poetry in about 10-15 mins. I hope you will like that too☺️☺️
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Good for you that you are trying out poetry. It has been one of the hardest writing styles for me to read and to write but as I have had to teach it to kids, I’m learning the beauty and power of poetry. This is a great start! Keep writing.
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It’s tough for me too. I work hard to write it. I am glad you teaching it to students. Poetry is greatest gift to mankind given by literature. I shared my second poem too. Do read that😊😊
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This is a very good start for your first poem. Keep writing. You’ll only get better. And the more you write, the more you will develop your own style. Sometimes you won’t even realize you have a style. Lol. But the most important thing to remember when writing poetry is to evoke the same emotions that you’re feeling at the time, in your reader. Make them feel what you feel. Whether it be love, pain, joy, hope. Keep at it. This was a good first piece and I look forward to reading more from you.
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Thank you. That’s a great compliment for me. I am glad you liked the poem. Your comment made my day. I’ll am working hard to write more poems. I really hope you will like my future work too.
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This is so beautiful!
God bless!
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Thank you very very much. I am glad you liked my first poem😊😊
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Wow beautiful poem
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Thank you very much😊😊
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Loved it! And dude your hand writing is perfect.
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Thank you so much☺️☺️ I am glad you liked the poem😊😊
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“Now my heart is a stray….”beautiful metaphore with sadness.
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Thank you. Sad things come naturally. I try to write poetry based on my personal experiences..
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Yeah.it is nature of a good writer.
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That’s a great compliment. I am super happy to know that you think me as a good writer😊😊
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I give u true comliment dear.
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Thank you. Your words made me very happy😊😊
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Welcome,dear.
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The pen is called the Standard student pen. 20 @ rupees 50 . Jokes
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Jokes apart it’s nice
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Thank you very much. Btw you are quite busy these days. What happened??
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A lot of workload and I have to prepare for NET as well . I’ll be back soon 🙂
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Oh that’s great. Best of luck for your exam👍👍 I hope you do great👌
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Thanks a lot . And how are you
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I am fine too. Busy these days…
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Fine?
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Yeah fine. Why??
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Good is good send fine is fine . Fine is not that good 😀
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Oh. Then toh I am good. Happy with my life at the moment😊😊
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That is awesome 🙂
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How are you??😊
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A little worked out sometimes but mostly happy 🙂
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Oh. That’s good. It’s good you are mostly happy☺️☺️ Always stay happy😊😊
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You too
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😊😊😊😊
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Fine is not good
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Hehe. Cheap things are better. Why use a 50000 rupees technology when a 10 rupee Pen can do the same job😉😜
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Quite deep.
I love this piece.
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Thank you. I am happy you liked my poetry☺️☺️
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You have talent and stick with it.
Poetry takes patience and I love that have a deep meaning behind it.
Love the adjectives 😶
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Thank you very much. Your comment made my day. I am glad you think I have a talent☺️☺️
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Impressive! It’s always good to try writing the way that scares you most. Do check out my poems too. Hope you like them. 🙂
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Yeah that’s good. It’s good to do things that scares you. I’ll definitely read them💙
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Although I am a big time tea lover and you are not.. but I like what you write..keep writing . Try some tea sometime
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Thank you for the compliment. I try many times to drink tea but never like the taste of it😂😂
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No don’t try to become a tea person, all great writers like yourself need to be hooked on coffee! Writing poetry is difficult so good job and keep at it!
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Yeah coffee is good. It made me really happy when you called me a great writer💙 yup poetry is difficult and I am just a beginner. I am glad you liked my poem☺️☺️
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Such a wonderful start!
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Thank you. I am glad you liked it😊😊
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Really interesting, thank you
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Thanks a lot for liking it. I am glad😊😊
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“Loving you is my biggest achievement”… love how it begins… didnt expect it to be so deep until I kept reading!
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I am glad you liked my poetry. It’s deep because I am going through this phase from last 6 years… Broken heart likes to write poetry..
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I do understand! When I went through something similar i used poverty to vent my frustration… you will be fine!
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I don’t think I’ll ever be fine. I am going through this since 2012..
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Stay strong
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Thank you bro😊😊
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Hi there, I really enjoyed your writing. Definitely keep doing it. I also just started writing, all the best
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked my poetry😇 all the best to you too😊
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It’s nice, I think you should continue honing your verse making skills, all the best
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Thank you for your suggestion😇 This was my first poem. I have shared three more after this. I hope you will like them😊😊
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Really liked it!! Well done 😊
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Thank you very very much. I have shared 3 more of my poems. Do read them too😇😇
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great start !!
read my blog @
https://wordpress.com/view/thesilencethatneverbroke.wordpress.com
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Thank you. I’ll definitely check out your blog too. Thanks for visting mine😊
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