Hello guys. How are you all? Thank you everyone for liking my first poetry and motivating me to write more. So here I am to share a new poem of mine. I hope it gets the same response as the first one. So here it is-
LOVE HURTS
Love is not just a word
Doing it makes your life absurd
There is no way to mend a broken heart
What if you both have different paths
I know they say love is blind
But I had only you on my mind
Thing about pain is, it demands to be felt
Take care of your heart or it will melt
A hurt so deep it cut like a knife
But wounds heal and I will go on with my life
Thank you everyone who motivated me try my hand in poetry. I am really happy I started writing poems.
I am working on a new poem. I’ll be sharing that soon too. I am love with writing poetry. I know it will take time for me to write a good one but I’ll be happy if I progress a little bit also with every new poem I write.
Thank you everyone. I hope you like my this poem too.
I hope you’re good..
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Yes I am fine. Why??
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Nothing…
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Oh ok.. Btw how are you??
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I’m good!!
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That’s nice. You liked my poetry??
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Yeah! You’re good at it…
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Thank you…
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Itna dull sa thank you…. Kadi has vi liya karo…😄😄
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Kya kare. Aap ka mood off tha so..
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Naah… Aisa kuch nhi tha… I was just trying to reply without using emojis… It doesn’t do well with me…does it?😄
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Oh.. No it doesn’t suit ur personality. You should use emojis. You should always be cheerful. You are my motivation to be happy😊😊
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Achha… Sachhi?
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Yup sachi..
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Okay…
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😊😊😊
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Well written
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Thank you very much☺️
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Beautifully written as always Mehul 😊
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Thank you buddy. I am glad you liked my poetry. It feels great to get appreciation for something you started recently only☺️😊
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You deserve it buddy 😊
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I am just a beginner in poetry. I have written one more. I’ll share that next week😊😊
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Oh sure. All the very best to you.
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Thank you very much☺️☺️
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😍😍😍😍absolute magic!!!!!! U know i love fantasy and both of your poems😍😍
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That’s the best compliment I ever got. Your comment made my day. Thank you very very much☺️☺️
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Most welcome
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☺️☺️😊😊
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Love it 😍!
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This is even better than your first attempt. I can already see the progress. Good use of imagery here. Love can definitely be painful, but we must go on with life. Keep writing.
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Thank you. I really don’t have words to tell you how happy I am to read your comment. I am happy you think I progressed. I am trying really hard..
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Keep writing my friend. I look forward to seeing your progression.
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Thank you. Yes I’ll keep writing and sharing my work😊 thank you for motivating me
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Like?Your poetry is loveliest,delicate savouring of gentle winds and sunlit vineyards, It is shame to use the word ‘Like’ to describe such genial thoughts.
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Thank you. I am super happy to read your comment. Your comment always makes my day. I am just trying my hands on poetry. I hope you will like my future work too☺️☺️
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Great going Mr Poet. Looking forward to more amazing poems by you.
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Thank you. I am not a poet. I am just trying to write poetries. I don’t know much about it. I am glad you liked my poetry😊😊
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Beautiful poem !
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it😊😊
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Lovely poem, enjoyed it thoroughly.
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked the poem. I am just a beginner in poetry world..
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This is just so beautiful Mehul!
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Thank you very much. I am happy you think my poem is beautiful. I am just a beginner in poetry world
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Happy Friendship Day Mehul💞💞
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Happy Friendship Day to you too Neetika😊😇
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Excellent!
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Thank you very much😊😊
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Nice one .keep it up👍
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Thank you very much😊 Welcome back on WordPress☺️☺️
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Most lovely poem”a hurt so deep……..my life”wonderful lines.
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked the poem. I am happy to take up poetry☺️☺️
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Most welcome,dear!!
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☺️☺️☺️
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Right on with the feelings in this poem. This is how I currently feel. Well written.
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Thank you. I am glad you liked my poetry. It feels great when someone relates to your work😇😇
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Yes it is ! That is also what I aim for… to connect with people on a deeper level.
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Yeah that’s what writing is all about. You can shed your emotions without worrying what others will think about you.
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I’m glad that you love writing poetry. It is wonderful
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Yeah I am loving it. I have shared 4 poetries till now. Do read them too😊
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Love hurts, I agree, but heartbreaks teach us a lot and so does love, therefore it is worth taking the risk, otherwise as humans we will cease to grow if we run away from love
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Yeah you are so true. Love and heart breaks teaches us a lot. It helps us to grow..
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