Thank you friends for liking my first post on my interest in poetry. I got many requests to share my own shayris. At first I was a little hesitant to share my work but a friend of mine motivated me to do it. So in this post I’ll be sharing with you my own work. I hope you all will like them.
As it is said that ‘Toote hue dil se hi shayri hoti hai’, i.e., ‘poetry comes out from a broken heart only’ so that’s the reason I started writing them. Do comment if you like my work or not.
- Dil hai koi sheesha toh nahi jo tune yun tod diya, Pyaar ki raah mei kyu aise tanha chod diya.
- Tune hi sikhaya tha muskurana, Ab tu nahi toh muskurahat kaisi.
- Yaad teri na jaati hai kabhi dil se, Na mei bhool pata hun, na tu aati hai kabhi.
I am just a beginner in writing poetry so I know they are not that good and I need a lot of improvement but like it’s said, you have to start from somewhere and journey of thousand miles start from a single step. So I took my single step and started writing. I hope you all will like it…
This is so beautiful! I love the expression and passion in your words – I look forward to reading more from you 🙂
Aqsa
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Thanks a lot for liking the post😊 I am happy you liked my words. It’s a big compliment for me😊
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My pleasure!! Keep writing 🙂 🙂
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Amazing💞💞💞👏👏👏👏Too good if you said you are a beginner, that’s great… Totally felt like shayari tute hue dil seh hei hoti hai…. bohot khub👏….
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Thanks a lot for liking the post😊 I am glad you liked my shayris. It means a lot to me😊
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It’s such a pleasure to read, you’re most welcome😇❄
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Amazing writing 🙂
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Thanks a lot buddy😊😊
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I liked the last one (more) 🙂
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Thank you buddy. I am happy you liked my post😊 As they are written by me so I like all of them equally😁
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Hehehe 😀
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I wish I knew how to read Hindi 😦 I’m sure your poetry is good!
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Oh. Don’t worry. Btw thanks for believing that it is good😊 But it’s nothing but few words written by a broken person for the person he loves..
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aww I’m sry and I’m sure (if you are the broken person) you will be totally okay and you will def find someone who will understand you & love you for who you are 🙂
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I too hope to find a person who will love me but for now I just can’t get over the person I am in love with.. Still thanks for your support..
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It takes time but you will soon realize that she is not worth your time and effort and you will find someone later on life that is worth having 🙂
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I too hope that.. Beautiful things take time but they definitely come to you. Thanks a lot😊😊
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Your very welcome! 🙂
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Amazing!!!
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Thanks a lot for liking the post😊
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You are welcome 😊
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Wah! Kya baat hai! I am glad you took up shayari. Truly, tareef ke kabil 🙂
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Thanks a lot ma’am.. I am really loving my new hobby😊 btw do you enjoy shayri??
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I appreciate good shayari Mehul!
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Nice. I think anything written from heart is good😊😊
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Yup! Totally agree!!
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Awsome 👍👍👍👍
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Thanks a lot for liking the post😊
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Which one are you talking about?
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I never heard of the poet you told me about. Maybe he too wrote the same thing before me. But I didn’t copy anyone.
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Who are you to say I copy. And I don’t need to prove you anything. I know about my work so I don’t care what you think.
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Beautifully penned emotions, all of them were amazing ❤ ❤
Keep it up…! 🙂
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Thanks a lot. I am just a beginner in this. I am happy you liked them😊
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Not liked it but loved it…🙂🤗😚
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Thanks a lot. It’s good to know that you loved it😊 It made my day😄😚
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Yr welcome dude…🙂🤗😚
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Nominated you for the versatile blogger award. http://wp.me/p8mNOB-4j. Check it out
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Thanks a lot for nominating me for this beautiful award. But I have already written about it once. I am sorry but I can’t write again about it…
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You have a talent for poetry!! The shayris are wonderful !!
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Thanks a lot.. It feels great when your fellow blogger likes your work😊😊
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My pleasure 😉
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Wow, loved it. If this is the beginning, I am waiting to see what else you bring.😊
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Thanks a lot for appreciation.. I am happy you liked them😊😊 your comment made my day😊
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Keep writing. Good luck 👍
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its beautiful mehul….sorry for late reply.Aap shayar bhi hain…do check out my new shayari
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Thanks a lot ma’am.. I am happy you liked it. Shayri comes naturally when you have a broken heart.. I’ll definitely check out your new Shayri…
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Plzzz…It comes when u have a loving heart😊
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Wahi toh duniya ka dastoor hai.. People having beautiful heart are the one’s having there heart broken…
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Cheer up Mehul😊😊
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That’s what I am trying to do now.. Change my lifestyle and stop caring about people who hurt me..
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You have to move on…back with a bang😊😊
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Thanks a lot. Thanks for your support😊 I’ll definitely move on☺️
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I just follow one song
“Dekh ke mujhko hansta gaata. ..sadh gayee ye duniya sadh gayee”😂😂
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Nice song.. I too love that song😁😊
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Kuch Ho na ho…but I get going.😊
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That’s what life is all about. Keep going on.. Btw there’s a show that always makes me happy, no matter what the situation is and that is F.R.I.E.N.D.S.😊😊😊
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Yup…keep smiling😊 😊😊
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How beautifully written!
The first one is my favourite!
I wonder how did I miss this post before😕
Great work anyways.
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Thanks a lot. I wrote these in memories of someone special. I am happy you read them now and even more happy as you liked my work😊😊
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I loved the first one!!! 😊
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Thanks a lot. I wrote them in memory of someone special… I am happy you liked them😊😊
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I guess, I know…
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I think everyone who reads my post knows.. But I am happy that I am over her now and happy again😊😊
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Good for you buddy!!! We’re glad you’re happy now!! 😊
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Thank you for saying so and thank you for being there for me😊 I really like my WordPress family😊😊
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Oh god!!!! You say so many “thank you “… You’re forbidden to say that to me now….😝😄
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Hehe.. Saying thank you is my superpower😂 you can stop me from using my power😜
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See, you too agree with me… Now stop!!! 😝😂😂
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Hehe😂 OK I’ll stop saying thanks now😊 I’ll save it for future😜
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That means you’ll never stop.. Uff….itna zulm na karo is nanhi si jaan pe..😥😝
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Like you have a bollywood ka keeda, I have keeda of saying thank you😂😂 so how can I stop it😜😜
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I’ll kill the keeda then… I’m very hard hearted… 😝😝😂😂😂
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I don’t think so.. Jitna bhi I got to know you, I think you are a really nice person😊
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Serious mat ho bhai….mai mazak kar rahi thi…😄😄 waise meri taarif karna chahte ho to kar sakte ho.. I don’t mind…😄😄
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Woh toh mei karta hi hun😊 And serious toh Mei hota hi nahi😜
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Hahahaha…….. Joke achha tha..😝😂😂😂
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Most of the times you’re serious…. That’s what I have felt, talking to you…
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Not most of the times. Yup I am a serious kind of person but not always..
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Okay.. Let’s make it three – fourth of Most of the times…😝 and I’m sorry, if you got offended with my statement…
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Hehe😂 like I said yesterday, you have answers for everything😜 no no don’t worry. Why will I get offended!! Being offended is the last thing on my list😊
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Oh thank god!! You aren’t. People generally do…because I’m blunt… 😄😃 but thank you! I’m glad to know you’re not… 😊
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I think that’s a good quality. I am also blunt sometimes. I like people who say things directly and not behind the back😄😊
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Ahaa.. Mujhe tumhari baat bahaut pasand aayi…😊😊😄😄
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Mujhe bhi aapki baat pasand aayi😊😊 Talking to you is really a good thing. Ultimate stress buster😄
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Haina… Mast hu na mai ek dum… 😉😄😄
Sorry! Kabhi kabhi mai khud ki taarif khud hi kar leti hu….😂😂 don’t mind please… 😃😄
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Khud ki taarif karna bhi ek kala hai. Aapki taarif karne ki list mei mera name bhi add ho gya😂😊
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List mein Number one pe toh mera hi naam hai… Mai khud ki favourite jo hu…😊😊😄
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Ek aur dialog. I think you are a walking dictionary of bollywood dialogs😂😂
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Hahaha…tum dialogues ginte ginte thak jaoge, par mai bolte bolte nhi thakungi…😂😂😂
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Don’t you worry. I’ll never get tired listening to your dialogs😜😊 I am good in listening😂
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Hahaha… That’s great!!! Good listener toh hona hi chahiye, especially, when you’re talking to me..😂😂
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It’s good that I am a good listener😊😊 btw are you on any other social networking site other than WordPress??
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I’m on Facebook but I rarely use it…
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Can you share your username?? Why don’t you use it? Don’t you like fb??
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I’m not really a fan of social media… But WP is an exception..
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Yup WordPress is really an exception😊 I really like WP😊 btw if you like you can add me on fb. My username is Mehul Singla. I have a page too related to my blog by name lifeinprogress29😊
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Sure! Will do when I open it…😊
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I am once again going to say that 2 magical words.. THANK YOU😂😊
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Hahaha.. Last time.. Accepted!! 😝😂😂😊
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It was nice talking to you and knowing you😊 Have a happy Sunday😊😊
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Same here! Well now, have a happy Sunday night!! 😊😄
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Happy Sunday night to you too😊☺️
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Okay.. I gotta go now.. Hum hai rahi pyaar ke, phir milenge chalte chalte… 😄😄
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I really love the way you use dialogs. Big fan of yours😊
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Ayee..❤ Autograph dedu… From the future superstar!!!! 😄😄😂
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Acha hai na. Abhi autograph mil jaage toh it sahi hoga.. Baad Mei toh you will be super busy😂😂
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Busy toh main abhi bhi hu khair…😝😂😂😂
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Acha ji.. Busy future superstar😜 koina abhi toh friends k liye time nikal hi sakte ho!!!
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Hahaha… Friends ke saath time bitati hu nikalti nhi…. 😜😄😄 agar ye dialogue hota toh kya mast taaliyan bajti… 👏👏👏👏👏
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Dialogue hai nahi but future superstar ne bol diya toh dialogue ban gya😂😊
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Oye hoye hoye… Itni taarif… Isi baat pe.. Kya baat! Kya baat! Kya baat!😄😂😂
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Chlo now I have to complete my assignment. Talk to you later. Bbie good night😊😊😊
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Okay!! Good night and sweet dreams😊, when you sleep! 😝😄
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I tried the translation. Hope I got it right💗
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I too hope you got it right.. Shayri is very famous in India and Arabic countries.. I enjoy it a lot..
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I speak French and Arabic, but could not make up the words in the post.
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Oh.. It’s not Arabic.. I don’t write in pure urdu. My writings are a mixture of urdu and Hindi..
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Ok. Very interesting.
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Lovely
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Thanks a lot😊😊
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